Can You Fix This IELTS Speaking Answer?

Help transform a student’s basic IELTS Speaking answer into a Band 9-worthy response!

[gouravpandey]

Simplicity is the key to scoring good in IELTS.

[PABNEK-ventures.foodies]

English speaking made so simple and easy to grasp

[blessingmaiye]

She adores dancing because it makes her feel energetic, and there's so many styles of dancing

[justinTran-mv]

She adores dancing because of feeling energetic with different dancing styles.

[IbrohimBurxonov-vkyl]

Thank you . Please do more videos like this ❤

[sabr-gj]

Hello, i’m 11 years old and I’m from Kazakhstan. I want to pass ielts, because i prepare me to get high score on the exam 😊 i hope i wrote this correct ✅

[ulugbek_]

Dancing, an intricate amalgamation of rhythmic bodily expressions, encompasses a vast array of styles, each demanding unparalleled dexterity, cultural awareness, and kinetic sophistication.
💀💀💀

[yugi]

Ehh I savor every method of dancing because it makes me feel vigorous. Band 6 to band 2.

[qhlivfo]

I adore dancing and it makes me feel energetic. There are so many style of dancing

[wales]

love how they test how natural one's English sounds instead of listening for pointlessly complicated words

[angeldeschain]

This is great for exams, but when you actually communicate with friends, you need to keep it simple. It's so weird that C1 and C2 levels make you sound snobbish rather than educated and well-read.

[gameon]

What people really need, is urbandict style of real actual contemporary vernacular. Everyday real life english stops at B2.

C1 and above is only needed by scholats or to read classic novels and to study english liguistics.

Nobody speaks like that in real life, not even locals would understand a word of what's being taught at IELTS 7+ courses 😂

[mahmoudnasrallah]

could you make videos like this as much as possible ? Please

[jaimeivanrodriguezmorales]

its so cool your pronunciation! I understand word by word that you pronounce

[mohammedfayaz]

Understanding is important, not grammer 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

[Journaledbypavneet]

i gave a reason for every question and the examiner kept asking “why?”
EVERY SINGLE QUESTION
is that how its done these days? was i just not aware?
what to do in a situation like that?

[pptan-eg]

i am a avid dancer”it’s that correct?❤

[Shehab-ohqx]

Brother, you have asked me to speak English in a simple way that people can easily understand. Using such words and non-words can cause problems for many people. Besides, such words are not always in everyone's mind. So we should express our opinions in simple language and in a simple way.❤

[AdriánRivera-hn]

I NEED dance...
like AIR, that heavenly beautiful and puré.

[raphaelbernoldi]

Your videos are awesome whaching from 🇧🇷