IELTS Writing Sample FROM 6.5 TO BAND 8

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[norel]

Thank you for your content, it really helped me especially with reading and listening in a short time. I got an overall band 8.

[priyaiyer]

Thanks Asiya. I used to listen to your videos n self learning for exams..fortunately I passed 8.5, 7.5, 7.7.5 in first attempt itself..

[ranyaulianty]

Hello, Ma'am. Thank you very much for all the learning materials that you gave to us through this platform. I just got my result and it was awesome, much higher than I expected, an overall 7.5 with 9 for listening and 8.5 for reading, and this test was my first time ever. Thank you for your help!

From Indonesia

[johannaalumbro]

This is crazy. This is the exact question I got for my IELTS test and I got a 6.5. I just saw this video today!

[parmindersingh]

Love your TEACHING skills from india. Keep it up

[reginajeremy]

Your videos are great, used your tips and am glad i chose you.

[sofiiapriazhnykova]

Thank you, Asiya, for your work!! I got 6, 5 in only one month by watching your videos!!!

[ajiteshrajkumar]

Thank you Fastrack ielts i asked overall band 8 thanks to you

[ArshdeepSingh-tyco]

mam the way of your teaching is tremendous

[akmalodinayev]

Thanks Asia for video I think it helps more

[rojahangirj]

Thank you so much for your video i can improve a little

[ximichael]

Gained lots of english knowledge, thanks.Merry Christmas and Happy new year！

[redhot]

Really good teacher Alisa. Can’t stop watching your video . So much value and help that you have bought to us

[sinuvarghese]

By watching your videos I got w-7.5. S- 7
thank u so much

[heymusiclovers]

Thank you very much Asiya, I love your videos..! They are very helpful and fun to watch, and I love the way you explain... it is very easy to understand and I got a lot of information...


and also, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!!!

[reiner]

please post more video like this. Love from myanmar

[marisantamaki]

Hi Asiya! I used your videos to prepare for my IELTS and they helped a lot! I got a band 8 on my first try! Thank you so much🤩

[eatsleep]

3:20 to get 7, uare aloowed to make some mistake (several mistake in essay)

4:10 MBP 1 transform
GRA 2 sentences -> 1 complex sentence (because)
LR people -> individuals
however-> despite this appeal

use more formal word
buy -> purchase
cheaper -> financial benefit

6:29 GRA 2 sentences -> 1 complex sentence (comma, and)
earning the most -> most productive years
few expenses -> higher disposable income

7:57 participle phrase
go up -> increase
rising - ever rising

[blackyrocky]

I got 6.5 band because of some spelling mistakes. I wrote embolances instead of ambulances. Sucuum to instead of succumb to. Those two were bigger mistakes I realized it next day when I checked out the spelling. I know spelling of ambulance and I know spelling of succumb to. But during the exam nervousness, anxiety and stress prevents us from doing better. So first we need to deal with mental health. Mental health must be must be muste be excellent in language learning.

[piyushsharma]

I am also trying to use variety of sentence structure to express the issues elaborately, while expecting a band higher than 7.5. Thanks for the video.
N ya! Missed the "Let's get started"✌