Thankyou so much for your review! I really appreciate your critiques and thoughts.
I will work harder to make a more appealing story that will make you want to root for characters and give better backgrounds!
Every moment is a learnibg process, and I cant thank you enough for yoyr honest opinions and feelings!!!
thenerdwonder
Hey ! I’m the editor of the comic . We at the behemoth team really apréciate the feedback . We take feedback seriously and we’ll be taking it into account thank you so much ! We promise we are working on the plot !
jestpukp
A good story is the most crucial element. I see potential, but only time will tell.
SergioLeonardoCornejo
The story based on evil character is something I do enjoy a lot. In fact, that makes me more interested in this. But yeah, I agree there has to be "something" in there to hook the reader in and make him root for the characters.
lysytoszef
Me: "I like the furry bombshell body"
Also me: "Oh god, have mainstream western comics had so many man shaped/shapeless women that a good resemblance of the female form is like a glass of water in the desert". 😱
aurahoneydew
Yay! Dannphan comic reviews. And here I thought she retired from comic reviews.
Domawinterice
My dream is for DannPhan to review my comic and tell me that I need to work on it more.
Intrenxic_Dark
the shadowy wolf creature reminds me of Malice Vundabar's pet Cheshire a sinister shady cat that attacks people from the Female Furies from the Superman series
mathieuleader
Talk about a Pleasant Suprise! I was one of the Backers so i immediately got curious! Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
MrX_UNI
This seems like it has some potential. I hope the creators keep at it and find their stride.
markt
I actually like the brick background on the cover. It’s unique and attention grabbing.
melodymakesart
Villain stories are cool, but we need to understand their motivations.
milestrombley
I actually like most of the cover art alot, I even like the background, only not the journalist, he looks flat and not really there, like if he was supposed to not be in the front, so somehow they forgot to indicate with the colors that he is infact in the front, if that backs any sense. The plot could have been good, I like Hulk and journalistic characters, but I'm not into psycho main characters that turn into bigger monsters🤷♀️
regishel
It honestly sounds like a lot of these Indie comics via Twitter aren't edited properly...
marigoann
How old is this artist hehe he.
Kid should have worked on her plot a bit more.
My first comic was also very edgy when i made it back in my teen years, now I'm almost 34 and i have made so many changes to that plot and made the characters more unique than just shallow edgy kill all bada$$es.
Rexorazor
The story is a bit generic but it seems fun, maybe down the line the main character will see she may not want to be a killer as much as she thinks. Also regarding the the furry aspect of this, at least this creator knows their target audience. You take a fairly attractive and ditzy character and turn her into a furry monstrosity with sex appeal. Not saying I find that attractive but there's a large audience for that.
captainhyrule
I really suggest review School Bus Graveyard. It's very good!
lunakitty
I feel like I'd be more invested in an anti-hero protag, rather than a evil protag...
Regardless the art seems cool.
yesshuayarrden
Eh. Nothing wrong with a story focusing on bad guys doing bad guy things. As long as the characters and story are interesting.
Martynde
Hey, we haven’t heard from you for a while! How’re you?
