【Oblivion】Shiva's Theme (FFXIV) (Cover)

Hello!!
I myself don't play Final Fantasy at all, but I stumbled across this song on YouTube and immediately fell in love with it. This also inspired me to start my own channel. I don't have much experience with mixing or singing, but I hope to grow from now on and improve along the way.
I couldn't find the full instrumental for this song, so I had to re-mix a shorter one I found. I will include the links below!
Any feedback or criticism is welcome! :3

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☆ LYRICS ☆
Staring at death, I take a breath, there's nothing left
Now close my eyes, for one last time, and say goodbye
Lying naked while the snow falls all around me
Drifting closer to the edge but She won't have me
Wake up in sweat, full of regret, try to forget
These memories, lurking beneath, lost in a dream

Unchosen paths, a broken past, forespoken wrath
The pain won't cease, I'll find no peace, no sweet release
Fragile creatures, we are taught to fear the Reaper
Ever running, we are dead before we meet Her
These voices telling me let it go
I try and try but I can't say no
This endless nightmare has just begun
My heart is dragging me down into oblivion

The endless lies, I've cast aside, locked them in ice
Steeled is my soul, my blood grown cold, I've gained control
Fearless creatures, we all learn to fight the Reaper
Can't defeat Her, so instead I'll have to be Her
These voices screaming to let it go
This time I'm screaming back no no no
My mind's made up, yeah my fear is gone
Open my eyes now here I come, oblivion

For the last time
I won't say goodbye
For the last time
I won't say goodbye

[lunyiea]

I like it. You sing it in a very cute way. <3