what is your problem?

[trumpetwizard]

I wasn't going to check, Sven. Truly I wasn't, and I was going to trust you. After the video restarted, I checked just to know, and it's WRONG. I TRUSTED YOU.

[DIGITALGHT]

nah, i enjoyed the poem first...and only checked when u talked about checking 💀
...YOU'RE ONE SYLLABLE OFF, GET HIM!!

[harrytodhunter]

Your goddamn right Svenny. I was singing it to the jackfilms haiku melody

[andrewlee]

Jokes on you Sven. I don't know how to count.

[crispy]

every time i see a haiku i start singing it in my head with Jacksfilm's haiku tune

[Riteliso]

A wonderful and unique critique of the tendency some people carry with them.

A poem within a poem.

Thank you Sven, very cool.

[connoreyestone]

"Uh thats one too many syllables bub"

[BrittneyDallas]

I actually don’t check till after I read it and I also read it from bottom to top . Wonderful poem.

[a.j.m]

Dude, I was legit just reading it and enjoying the tune😭

I’m too stupid to remember the rules of a haiku anyway lol

[julian]

Haikus actually don't work based on Syllables but Moras.

[mondobe]

I've been on Reddit long enough to recognize a Sokka haiku when I see one

[slick]

Lemme fix this for you Sven,

autumn days fly past
sneaking and leaving soon
thoughts of winter lurk

❤️

[Kadeinthestarz]

I literally was having a stroke, trying to read it because I’m dyslexic and then I’ll send this man grabs the camera and starts yelling at me lol😭💀

[ScarlettTheViewer]

It needed to be said. But to set the record straight, I was simply enjoying the poem. I only count the syllabus if given an abundance of time, and even then, it's to develop a deeper appreciation for the work. If I can't tell it's not a haiku simply by the feel or the flow, then I am in no place to complain. Thank you, Sven.

[i_am_blur]

Actually, I was just surprised you know WTF a haiku is.

[Stickmayne]

Remember in avatar when Sokka gets the syllables wrong in that haiku? How embarrassing.

[boopthesnoot]

"that was a haiku, you just haiku'd me. I feel weird."

[krazyKokoroYt]

Maybe this poem was lost in the sauce that we spilled, that never got refilled

[Kizaran]

Lol yeah I do that but ironically this one time I was like "oh Sven wrote a haiku? what's it about?"

[prepor]

I not only check any haiku when I see one, I check it against the haiku music by jacksfilms.