Sweetrobin's Fan Fiction Project: Asha

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4,500 words by November 10, 2024

She was the blood of the kraken, daughter of the Lord Reaper of Pyke. But that mattered little today. There’s no sea for a hundred leagues, Asha thought as she took a moment to gauge the lay of the land.
That land was white. The snow was still falling and had blanketed the village, the lakes, the camp. For now, all looked empty, clean, like a fresh sheet of paper waiting to be filled. History is writ in blood. Her nuncle Rodrick had told her something like that, but Asha doubted anyone would ever read of her. How could they? Whatever blood was put down in the morning light would be buried by midday.
Most daughters are forgotten, she knew, but she was not most daughters. Most daughters wouldn’t be here, axe in hand, waiting for battle. Fighting for a demon, drown me for a fool.
The southroners were given the right wing. The enemy had cavalry, Benjicot Branch reported, so the men had been armed with spears, forming rank on rank of steal hoarfrost. Under a fiery heart banner heavy with snow, Ser Richard Horpe commanded, the knight mounted atop a grey palfrey. As thin as the horse was, it was one the healthier ones, taken from the lot the Braavosi banker had brought in the night. The moths on Ser Richard’s shield were caked over with ice, but Asha could make out of some of the other men’s heraldry: the fox head of Florent, the pod of Peasebury, the spucetrees of Fell.
Big Bucket Wull led the left. Behind his shaggy garron stood hundreds of spears from his own clan, clad in fur and mail, with bear-paws lashed to their boots. Farther back were Norreys and Knotts, Harclays and Liddles, Burleys and Flints — this morning, the quarrelsome northerners almost looked orderly. But will they stay that way? Ranks of spears require obedience and discipline, yet each of these northmen no doubt wanted glory for themselves. It could be their undoing.
The middle was Arthor Karstark’s. Stannis had given the traitor’s son a chance to prove himself, against the council of his second. Banners with a white sunburst sprouted up amongst the twelve hundred spearmen, though only one of every three soldiers was truly sworn to Karhold. Let no man call Stannis unwary. Clansmen were the bulk of the army, one on each shoulder of the Karstark men. Beneath the snow, however, the men all looked much alike.
The king led from the rear, as green land kings were wont to do. There, the paltry reserve gathered around him: a cavalry of two score knights and a dozen northmen. Asha and her six ironborn were mounted with them, though only Tris and Roggon looked comfortable ahorse. From their islet, they would see the carnage unfold on the flat land before them, and ride to where they were needed. If our mounts don’t die when spurred.
And in truth, they couldn’t see that far. Their hill was scarcely higher than a stage, and the falling snow curtained much and more of the world. The woods beyond the Crofter’s village were hidden, as too was the farside of camp and the king’s tower. Even the flame atop it was gone. The foe might have marched right by them and no one would be the wiser, like a reaver overlooking prey on a starless night… if it weren’t for the pyre.
To the right of the reserve, the fire still roared, its garish flames matching the heart inlaid on Stannis’ breastplate. To his helm, two weirwood branches had been affixed, giving him what looked like a stag’s antlers. The wood had come from the tree on the left, its face as pale and stern as the king’s. Between two gods, and neither of them mine.
True to his word, Stannis had swung the sword himself. It was as a Stark of Winterfell would have done , she reminded him. The blade danced with blinding light as it sliced through the scrawny neck. Before the weirwood, blood sprayed out, as red as summer cherries. The show made the northmen roar with delight. Then, Ser Godry and Ser Corliss fed the body to the flames, the king himself tossing the head on the pyre. To that, the southoners cheered.
It was not long before the snow by the weirwood was white again. It’s still hungry.
A trumpet sounded somewhere in the east, harsh and angry.
“Fight hard today, cunt.” Ser Clayton Suggs said as he rode up beside Asha. “Like you’re mad with moon blood.”
“I can give you a bloody gash, if you’d like strength to your arm.” She spun the axe in her hand.
Suggs laughed, then grew serious. He closed his visor. Asha knew to do the same.
Out of the falling snow, she spotted a horse. Then five, then fifty, then five hundred. And with them: a thousand men-at-arms. They were here.
The leader of the enemy wore silvered plate and mail, inlaid with details of lapis lazuli. The crest of the warhelm was tall, fashioned in the shape of the Twin Towers of House Frey. His shield bore those same towers, quartered with the snakes of Paege and the tree-and-ravens of Blackwood.
Before him rode banner bearers. One bore the star and lion standard of King
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If we do ever see Winds, it’s gonna be so interesting going back through these chapters and seeing if Preston really was wrong about half of it

theorooney
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“Qarl the Maid dies”

Tris Botley nation rise up

TREYtheExplainer
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Happy writing! Thanks again preston for giving us this project for free! <3

toreamodeo
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Big Walder should surrender so that after the battle they could mock him as someone who is a hostage of another hostage. what's worse is that he surrendered to a woman, a little parallel to his uncle Merrett

Sevastiem
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Not only will just the North be pissed off at Stannis if that isn't actually Theon on that pyre, but every army from Wull to Manderly is going to be massively pissed at him if they lose hundreds of men with his ice "trick."

almsahrah
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Preston, what you've written so far is already amazing! Though for describing the hill Asha's on, instead of the word stage I think "gallows" or "gallows platform" could be cooler. As she feels she's about to die in the following battle and is stuck where she is! George has used the word gallows before too.

Bobbybobwat
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Ice breaks after the Manderlys arrive? So the plan kinda backfires on Stannis, where more of his own allies get caught in the crunch? Or are the Manderlys more at the edge of the lake when it breaks, so most of their army is unaffected and they just serve to prevent the Freys from retreating onto solid ground?
Pre-Manderlys showing up, are Stannis' supporters able to hold their own against the Freys? Because if they are, then the ice breaking really doesn't turn out to be as monumental an advantage as Stannis thinks it is, and if they aren't, then that should shift Asha's motivations (it makes no sense for her to think she'll have glory and Stannis' praise for taking out the Frey leader if she thinks Stannis is a goner)
The lake is full of wooded isles - I guess Stannis has stacked his troops onto those - gives them a bit of high ground, cover, and protection when the ice breaks?
Also what is the role of the second lake? Is it just to make the crofter's village basically surrounded by lakes on the map, so the Freys won't think it suspicious when they have to cross the lake to reach what they think is the village?

Mj_Jetson
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Big Walder can't die, he's gonna inherit theTwins.

Mprator
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OMG IT’S HAPPENING 😆 THE BATTLE OF ICE FINALLY 🩵

MrPhbahia
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2 ish years into TWOW fanfic and we're closing in on the battle of ice. 🥳

OfficialArthusamakh
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You know Preston about to drop a fire video when you see an MS paint diagram

iamnotagoose
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I would think Asha would compare the icy field of battle to a flat sea, given that's her main experience of warfare (ironically, it is in fact mainly frozen water).

johnpotts
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If Asha k*lls Walder, and feels guilty, it parallels Theon’s guilt

trippinzombiez
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Fighting for a demon, drown me for a fool.

So excited!!! ❤❤❤

santsi
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Also again I won't write but for anyone looking for other great inspiration for when the ice breaks I recommend looking up the following

A scene from the original the Omen 1976 where a man dies while others are trying to break the ice of a lake, maybe you have osha be a sub for the man or her trying to save someone.

Another great scene I can see is a moment from The Walking Telltale Season 2 where Luke has to cross ice and it breaks under. You can have it be here osha is trying to move carefully while soldiers are trying to kill her. You look up "luke's death TWD"(spoilers but the game is old anyway)

Blazecap
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Going to have a go at a chapter for the first time!

sammclaughlin
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Mandon Moore drives his standard right through his foe at the last second when Tyrion leads a sortie at the Blackwater. Might be a cool move for Hosteen. Also Tyrion nearly dies on the bridge of ships as things slide and crack beneath him. Tyrion almost falls in, then reaches out to who he thinks is a friend (Moore) who then cuts his nose off. Maybe Tris does this to Qarl somehow. He does want Ashas hand and have plenty of motive to dispose of Qarl

ericl
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At the beginning when comparing the snow to a white sheet of paper, I feel like if they had paper during medieval times or similar conditions, it probably wouldn't be white at all and therefore, looking at fresh snow would not remind them of it?

punkfacexo
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Oh thank goodness Preston. I was worried from your livestreams you might've abandoned the idea of having an army falling into the ice. I didn't want to write a dissertation on how lakes freeze from the top-down and how the misbegotten Minnesotan you mentioned in your streams was mistaken about how thick they freeze, how different ice forms, and how frozen snow - is bad at supporting the weight of a person. Plus, y'know, it's cool.

durianthesleepy
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I appreciate the addition of Corlys’ name to one of the knights; attribute to the Seasnake, I’m sure.

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